6 one more agree and disagree
Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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There is a famous saying that an aim-less life is equivalent to being dead. A segment of people considers fortune to be responsible for someone to reach their desired aim. I strongly disagree with this statement as, in my opinion, hardwork and proper training are the paths to to acheive the aims in life.
Those who believe the luck to be the reason for obtaining the goals in life are greatly misinformed. Some successful people don't want others to succeed so they hide their hardship and spread out rumors that it was pure luck that led them reaching their targets. Aforementioned false claims are considered to be true by some, leading them to think that luck can get them reach their final goals.
In reality, it has been recorded in history countless times that one of the most crucial components to achieve goals in life is hardwork. Practice makes a man perfect, and if this is fused with the proper training - the positive outcome is guaranteed. For example, a recent study conducted by one of the Chinese universities by observing about 1000 students, having the aim of becoming a successful mathematician in their lives, found that only those who attended regular classes and studied long hours throught the duration of the observation were able to successfully reaching their end goals.
In conclusion, even though false-claims may lead a few to believe in luck, I have strong beliefs that intensive hardwork and focused training are mandatory to acheive the life goals for an individual.
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hardwork = hard work
acheive = achieve
throught = throughout
Rewriting the topic sentence for each body paragraph.
ReplyDelete1. The most important reason why some people believe luck to be responsible for obtaining goals in life is the misinformation.
2. On the other side, the most significant factor behind a person achieving goals in life is hard work.