3.1 I procastinated again yesterday.
I didn't write the essay yesterday as well. Too bad!!!!!
So, I woke up early today and wrote one for the following question:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
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A chunk of people believe that financial help provided to developing states by developed nations does not resolve the poverty, hence other means of assistance should be considered by these countries. I fully agree with this statement because of the issues, extravagance and corruption, related to assistance sent in the form of money along with the benefits linked to other forms of aid: education and sending professionals over.
A couple of problems may arise when advanced countries send monetary help to poor nations. Firstly, high chances of over spending in wrong sectors because without proper guidance officials from these states may end up utilizing the aforementioned help in inproper fields. For example, a few years ago Germany gave more than 200 million dollars to Sri Lanka to boost its economy which resulted as a waste because Sri Lanka spent most of the amount in buying expensive arms for its military. Secondly, there is a high probablity of the funding not reaching to the adequate people because of the corruption available in the the governments of poor countries.
On the other hand, alternatives come with lucrative perks. Advanced countries should provide aid in the form of improving education system in the poor realms because an educated person will acquire the required skills to overcome other difficulties, like poverty, in his life. Additionaly, sending professionals as a mean of help is also very useful because these professionals, for example Doctors and Engineers, can help in advancement of the society which will result in improvement of the economy.
In conclusion, due to the risks involved in monetary assistance, rich countries should look for other options, similar to education and sending professionals, in efforts to overcome poverty in poor realms.
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After pasting the essay in the text editor here, I found some mistakes which I will not fix in the essay so that when I refer back, I can easily see my mistakes. Those spellings are:
Inproper = Improper
Probablity = probability
Additionaly = Additionally
I will rewrite the topic sentences for both of my body paragraphs.
ReplyDelete1. The main problem that can arise when rich countries send aid to poorer nations is the high probability of overspending because governments of most of the poor countries are normally corrupted.
2. The best alternative available is in the form of help to spread the education across poor nations because an educated person will acquire the required skills to overcome other difficulties, similar to poverty, in their life.